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Translation Question

Postby Appius Fabius Helenus » Fri Feb 17, 2017 8:06 pm

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Re: Translation Question

Postby Titus Flavius Severus » Fri Feb 17, 2017 8:53 pm

Dignum est ut veri glorificate Те, Deiparentem
Perpetuo et Matrem Dei Nostri.

Honestiorem Cberubin
et longe multum gloriosionem Seraphim
et eam quae caste Deum Verbum generavisti
veram Deiparentem Те magnificamus.
Quae medicamenta non sanat, ferrum sanat; quae ferrum non sanat, ignis sanat. Quae vero ignis non sanat, insanabilia reputari oportet...
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Re: Translation Question

Postby Lucia Horatia Adamas » Sat Feb 18, 2017 9:15 pm



Ap. Fabio Heleno T. Flavio Severo omnibusque L. Horatia Adamas S.P.D.

As I am not familiar with the original text (and am slowly recovering from severe and consecutive illnesses), I may not be of much assistance, but 'rectus' in line 8 must be neuter, 'rectum,' as is 'axion.' Here we must have a neuter, 'it is right,' not a masculine substantive, 'rectus,' especially when a woman is the subject. I would be inclined to say 'vere' or 'verum' rather than 'vero,' but 'vero' seems okay.

'Serafim' is more normally spelled 'seraphim,' at least in English. If this were a normal Latin noun rather than a Hebrew-derived one, we would use the ablative of comparison instead of 'quam,' and 'habet' must be 'habent,' plural, as both 'cherubim' and 'seraphim' are Hebrew plurals; -im is a plural marker in Hebrew, corresponding with -in in Arabic. Not quite sure what you intended by 'in saecula' and 'major honorem;' for the latter at least it seems better to say something along the lines of 'excelles etiam seraphim (in) honore' or 'honor tuus et illum seraphim superat / excellat.' Livy used 'in aeternum' for 'forever,' which may be what you intended with 'in saecula.'

I don't think that 'gloriosionem' is a Latin word…it is not in the OLD, in any case. Maybe 'gloriosior,' but the primary meaning of 'gloriosus' in classical Latin is by no means complimentary.

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